A dream in my eye
Not an effort too shy
To make a mark I had hoped
To conquer the world I had conjured
But then my feet froze in the cold
As unfolding before me was the story of old
I saw coming true the lurid reality I always dread
Lost on me was the path I had hoped to tread
The pain pinches me no end
My efforts are no better than castles of sand
Alas it was never about how hard I work
For never was it possible to be noticed in the dark
God give me the strength to stand
Another day to live another fight to withstand
For I still have a dream in my eye
And I don’t want to be an effort too shy
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nice !! :) ... actually padhna shuru kiya to socha useless hi hoga, but despite my extremely limited knowledge of poetry i think this is really good!
well written...i must say...but very depressing...cheer up man
Very few people can channelize their frustrations into poetry. Come on now start feeling special :).
Hope you get the poetic justice that is missing from this poem.
How cute! a nice let out of emotions... feeling a lot better now? :)
Hey PP .. i really liked the gadget on your page which gives links to other's blogs.. thanks.. its really useful. i found Pande ji's and Shivi's blog there...
Never knew you had it in you! I am proud of you :-)
Job well done PP.
I love you
Finally after giving all my supposed gyaan on poetry (which I dont have the courage to post like u PP)...thought it best to leave a comment..
Well emoted especially if its a first one..the show stealer for me is the Name (the most difficult to get) and ur peom's is truly "Icing on cake" :)
can we please have a more Happy Happy post now??
yeh blog so kyon gaya hai!
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